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Bailey: Twelveby ~walker1812

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This is a crop of 'Bailey: Eleven'...[link] do you like one better than the other? Do you like them both? Or neither when compared to my other photos of Bailey?

Let me know, I'm curious and can take constructive critique... it's how we learn what people think.

~DiomedesZX Jan 4, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

I'm glad you can take constructive criticism, no one learns from "That's hot!" or "This sucks!"

I love watching your port, the shots are always so good, so it's usually hard for me to find anything to comment on. As always, this shot has great lighting, tones, composition, but I found it less interesting than the others. I really focus on perfectionism in my shots, and work on getting the little details perfect, so I'm nitpicky when I look at photos.

The first thing that bothered me was the make-up. It just looks a little blotchy near her eyes. The skin is great, but the darkness around her eyes isn't as even as I'd want it. Second, the skin is just a touch blown out, especially on her wrist and nose.

I hope these help. I'm not a pro, just someone who enjoys photography as a hobby. Of course, I'll always welcome comments form another Florida photographer anytime you want to pick through my gallery.

~walker1812 Jan 4, 2011

hey no worries, i agree with you on some of the comments, sometimes its just a case of using the best photo you have though... i still need work

~DiomedesZX Jan 8, 2011 Hobbyist Photographer

Well of course I don't expect you to agree with all of my comments, but I had to make them in the hopes that some of them would resonate.

~walker1812 Jan 10, 2011

no worries, all good

~morolen Jan 6, 2011 Photographer

Perhaps you could try to crush the highlights down in post a little? Though i disagree about the makeup, i rather like how it looks.

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